Post by Solitaire Keighley on Jan 4, 2007 17:03:51 GMT -5
Kadence,
First and Foremost I would like to welcome you to Hogwarts Family. We are glad to have you as our newest member. Now on to any possible needed Biography changes:
You're biography is good for starters. Although I would like to know a bit more about Kade's history. What she was like as a small child, why she feels so conflicted between who she is and who she wants to be, etc. Tell us more about her parents. Obviously they are pure-bloods, but what do they do? Tell us more about her family. Why was it expected of her parents for them to be married and have her? Give us a bit more about her apperance, ie: Is she fair complected or does she have beautiful tan skin, what color are her eyes, does she have, say, freckles or any thing of that nature. About her wand, we would like to keep wands as canon as possible, and since vamp's blood isn't canon yet, we ask that you change this. There are a few spelling errors as well, you can use the spell check button near the Post Message button to scan the post for these errors. Reply to this with these few things fixed and we will be happy to accept it for you. One other thing, your avatar is supposed to be a representation of your character, not just any icon you come across. Say perhaps an actress or model that you find that resembles what you picture you're character to look like. We only ask that before you decide on an actress or model that you check the Avatars posts. This is a place we keep a list of all actresses/actors, singers/songstresses and models that are already being used for someone else's character.
Name: Kadence Daniels
House: Slytherin
Blood: Why, pureblood, of course.
Age: 11
Year: 1
Wand: 11 and 1/2 inch Willow tree which is hollow. It has two drops of vampire blood in the center. It is rather obvious that it was not made by Ollivander.
Appearance: Kade is about 5'4 with brown hair dyed blonde, which is cut just below her chin with bangs that sweep to the side. She's got a curvy figure, but thin waist. To those much older than her, she has a fresh, innocent look about her, but to those her age, (boys) she is alluring and mysterious.
Biography (Include information about the characters history, family, personality and hobbies):
Personality: Kade is cruel and unyielding with an angry disposition. She will not let anyone stand in her way, and nor will she be told what to do.
Inside, she is conflicted by who she is and who she'd like to become.
History: Kade is the only child to Diana and Minos Daniels, who are a well known Slytherin family. She was born in 1986 and has spent her whole life expecting to go to Hogwarts and be sorted into Slytherin. She was only born to be and hier and because it was what was expected of her parents. That is the same reason her parents married in the first place.
Family: Father-Minos (45) and Mother-Diana (39)
Hobbies: Kade loves to cause trouble, be in controll, make potions, and get what she wants. Secretly, she writes stories.
First and Foremost I would like to welcome you to Hogwarts Family. We are glad to have you as our newest member. Now on to any possible needed Biography changes:
You're biography is good for starters. Although I would like to know a bit more about Kade's history. What she was like as a small child, why she feels so conflicted between who she is and who she wants to be, etc. Tell us more about her parents. Obviously they are pure-bloods, but what do they do? Tell us more about her family. Why was it expected of her parents for them to be married and have her? Give us a bit more about her apperance, ie: Is she fair complected or does she have beautiful tan skin, what color are her eyes, does she have, say, freckles or any thing of that nature. About her wand, we would like to keep wands as canon as possible, and since vamp's blood isn't canon yet, we ask that you change this. There are a few spelling errors as well, you can use the spell check button near the Post Message button to scan the post for these errors. Reply to this with these few things fixed and we will be happy to accept it for you. One other thing, your avatar is supposed to be a representation of your character, not just any icon you come across. Say perhaps an actress or model that you find that resembles what you picture you're character to look like. We only ask that before you decide on an actress or model that you check the Avatars posts. This is a place we keep a list of all actresses/actors, singers/songstresses and models that are already being used for someone else's character.
Name: Kadence Daniels
House: Slytherin
Blood: Why, pureblood, of course.
Age: 11
Year: 1
Wand: 11 and 1/2 inch Willow tree which is hollow. It has two drops of vampire blood in the center. It is rather obvious that it was not made by Ollivander.
Appearance: Kade is about 5'4 with brown hair dyed blonde, which is cut just below her chin with bangs that sweep to the side. She's got a curvy figure, but thin waist. To those much older than her, she has a fresh, innocent look about her, but to those her age, (boys) she is alluring and mysterious.
Biography (Include information about the characters history, family, personality and hobbies):
Personality: Kade is cruel and unyielding with an angry disposition. She will not let anyone stand in her way, and nor will she be told what to do.
Inside, she is conflicted by who she is and who she'd like to become.
History: Kade is the only child to Diana and Minos Daniels, who are a well known Slytherin family. She was born in 1986 and has spent her whole life expecting to go to Hogwarts and be sorted into Slytherin. She was only born to be and hier and because it was what was expected of her parents. That is the same reason her parents married in the first place.
Family: Father-Minos (45) and Mother-Diana (39)
Hobbies: Kade loves to cause trouble, be in controll, make potions, and get what she wants. Secretly, she writes stories.
