Post by Adrian Hollows on Nov 4, 2006 11:15:49 GMT -5
Welcome to Hogwarts Family. Your biography is good, but I do have one main question. Why did her parents hide their magic from her, especially if she had an older brother who was attending Hogwarts? Also, to give the biography a bit more depth, what are her interests, her favourite subjects? Did she insantly forgive her parents for not telling her the truth, and her brother for hiding it from her too?
I actually don't know if Lacey would ask for you to change the name, so I'll PM her. Unfortunately this means that, even if your biography didn't need any changes, you would have to wait to be approved anyway. I'm sure Lacey will reply as soon as she can, so please be patient. If you would like to change the name anyway, then feel free.
Your biography is below, for easier access. I look forward to reading it when you've finished.
Edit: Lacey has no objection to the name, so do not feel obliged to change it.
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Name: Laysea Baker
House: Gryffindor
Blood: Pure
Age: 12 and half
Year: 2
Wand: 10” Oak, Phoenix Feather
Appearance: She is 5”3 and weighs around 97 lbs. Her hair is a dark brown and almost matches the color of her eyes, except her eyes have a small bit of green in them making them hazelishly green blue.
Biography (include information about your character's history, personality and interests):
Laysea was born in Texas, America. Not many wizarding schools that her parents knew of so they moved to England when Laysea turned seven. She never knew of her nature. Her parents kept it hidden. When she had found out that she was a witch at first she was a little unsure. She had asked her parents if it was some kind of prank or something like that. They had proved her wrong with a few spells. Like levitating objects in her room and cooking her birthday cake with magic and making a load of butterflies, dragonflies, and fairies fly out of it. “Magic isn’t real!” She had told them. Nope. They had yet proved her wrong again. She had been sent to Hogwarts with a deep black looking owl she had named Smokey, after her old dog she had had when she had lived in America, which she still fairly remembered.
She has one older brother. Her parents had told her that he had been sent to boarding school. ‘What a lie,’ she had told them when she found out that much. Now he was in his seventh year as she was just entering her first. Her parents jobs were always discreet but she had never thought anything of it. Now that she knew as much as she did she found that they worked at the ‘Ministry Of Magic’ as something they wouldn’t tell her. She truthfully didn’t care too much so she let it slide so that she would get more questions answered about Hogwarts and not her parents jobs.
Future: She used to hope she would grow up to be a doctor. Now she was definitely sure she could with her experiences she would have at a school full of magic.
I actually don't know if Lacey would ask for you to change the name, so I'll PM her. Unfortunately this means that, even if your biography didn't need any changes, you would have to wait to be approved anyway. I'm sure Lacey will reply as soon as she can, so please be patient. If you would like to change the name anyway, then feel free.
Your biography is below, for easier access. I look forward to reading it when you've finished.
Edit: Lacey has no objection to the name, so do not feel obliged to change it.
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Name: Laysea Baker
House: Gryffindor
Blood: Pure
Age: 12 and half
Year: 2
Wand: 10” Oak, Phoenix Feather
Appearance: She is 5”3 and weighs around 97 lbs. Her hair is a dark brown and almost matches the color of her eyes, except her eyes have a small bit of green in them making them hazelishly green blue.
Biography (include information about your character's history, personality and interests):
Laysea was born in Texas, America. Not many wizarding schools that her parents knew of so they moved to England when Laysea turned seven. She never knew of her nature. Her parents kept it hidden. When she had found out that she was a witch at first she was a little unsure. She had asked her parents if it was some kind of prank or something like that. They had proved her wrong with a few spells. Like levitating objects in her room and cooking her birthday cake with magic and making a load of butterflies, dragonflies, and fairies fly out of it. “Magic isn’t real!” She had told them. Nope. They had yet proved her wrong again. She had been sent to Hogwarts with a deep black looking owl she had named Smokey, after her old dog she had had when she had lived in America, which she still fairly remembered.
She has one older brother. Her parents had told her that he had been sent to boarding school. ‘What a lie,’ she had told them when she found out that much. Now he was in his seventh year as she was just entering her first. Her parents jobs were always discreet but she had never thought anything of it. Now that she knew as much as she did she found that they worked at the ‘Ministry Of Magic’ as something they wouldn’t tell her. She truthfully didn’t care too much so she let it slide so that she would get more questions answered about Hogwarts and not her parents jobs.
Future: She used to hope she would grow up to be a doctor. Now she was definitely sure she could with her experiences she would have at a school full of magic.
